For and against essay (1)
KIDS LIMITATIONS
Instagram is a social network that has become very popular. Through Instagram, teenagers can talk to other people, upload photos and even comment them. However, without some limitations, they can have problems. But, what would think teenagers if their parents looked at their Instagram's page?
On the one hand, teenagers need some privacy. If parents look at their account, they will probably think that they do not trust them. Everyone has the right to have some privacy. Moreover, teenagers will talk to their friends about things that they do not want their parents to know.
On the other hand, if parents looked at their teenagers' account that would avoid many problems. Social networks are very dangerous because you are exposed to cyberbulling and social problems. Furthermore, hackers can steal your account and have all your data.
To sum up, despite the fact that parents normally do not look at their children's account, if they looked at the social networks of the younger ones, they could avoid problems related to these pages. For this reason, in my opinion, parents should look at the teenagers' Instagram to give them more security.

It's a very good opinion essay!!! YOU SHOULD BE PROUD!!! Keep doing it like this and you'll have a 10 at the end of the term!! OR not.. JK
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